Aw, that’s so lovely to hear, Priya. I’ve been away from the short stuff for a while so I decided to push myself. The ideas are harder to stir up than the words! Thank you so much for reading!
The description of the apartment! I almost scrolled back to the top to check if this was fiction. And with this dark apartment comes a light— the neighbor. 👏😊
You develop a sudden, intense coffee craving? (I’m a very linear thinking person. Life is a trajectory that is graphable using ballistics chart. Heh.)
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Hoping you will drop the next part soon, I would have preferred to binge read this . It's a really interesting read.
Thank you, what every writer wants to hear.
Lovely build up … keenly anticipating part deux
Thanks, Barrie. I’m going through your micro stories and they are so good!
Aw, that’s so lovely to hear, Priya. I’ve been away from the short stuff for a while so I decided to push myself. The ideas are harder to stir up than the words! Thank you so much for reading!
Isn’t it crazy?! Ideas are hard and sometimes one idea shows up and won’t leave.
Ah, that’s so true. The one that won’t let you go … I have one just like that.
Oooh. Why, anything could happen, Priya! Suspense!
Right, and probably not a romance! Thanks, Jeanine!
The description of the apartment! I almost scrolled back to the top to check if this was fiction. And with this dark apartment comes a light— the neighbor. 👏😊
Carissa, you’re so discerning! Thank you, yes, into the dark apartment comes light (life).
Gorgeous build. And the quiet, gray-on-gray scene of you lying in bed watching leaves fall-—a perfect canvas to begin your story.
Thank you, Kimberly!
The leaves being softened by the water is a powerful image.
Water makes me think of mothering. Thanks, Julie.
A very gripping start to a story, Priya.
Maybe a coffee inspired love affair.
Maybe he’s a crazy murderer.
Maybe she slips at the store going to get coffee and files a law suit against the shop... who knows where it could go :)